CHAPTER 1
Hi, my name is Max. Have you seen before a real "MUMMY"? Well , i do , and i am going to tell the story, it was all started in last year at the first week of June.......
That morning when i woke up , i look at the window and saw the Postman putting a letter into my mail box . I quickly when down to took the letter . I won three ticket to Egypt! I was so happy and i ran to tell my parents the good news.my father said:"Congratulation son ! Your dream came ture!""I know ,i always wish to go to Egypt !Oh, and how am i going to do with this two tickets?""hei,how about tell your friendto go with you?""That's a great idea dad ! Thanks dad , i'll go and call them , ok?""ok!" Then, i rush to the phone and start calling Danny and emma . I called Danny first ,when Danny heard what i said, Danny shouted:" That's great due! Oh,we will meet at tomorrow at 6:00 p.m. ! "ok!" Then, i called Emma. When i told Emma the good news , Emma said:"Egypt ?You mean the place has Pyramid?""Ya ,you're right !""....."Suddenly, Emma shouted:"That's great i always want to go to Egypt !""Ya, me too!"
CHAPTER 2
The next day at 6:00p.m., we took airoplane to Egypt. we sat in the airoplane 13 hours, we were so boring ! Then, we waited and waited and waited....At last, we arrived Egypt!We were so hungry, we quickly went to the nearby restaurant to eat.Yum!Yum!Yum!It was so delicious!
When night falls, we went to our hotel to rest. The next day, a man came to our hotel and introduce himself:"Hello kids, my name is Janus, you can call Mr.Janus,i'm you tourguide.""tourguide?You mean you can take us to visit Piramids?"Emma said happily."Yes! Of couse!"answered Mr.Janus.Then, we quckily change our chothes and follow Mr. Janus to the desert. When we arrived, we went into the Piramids. In side the Piramid is so dark, i can't even see my own finger nails!
Sunddenly, something felt down , then , we saw two scary red glowing eyes!Just then , Mr. Janus light up a candle, phew! That was close ,thank goodness it was just a mouse! A few minute late, The ground were moving like an earthqueak. Then, a Mummy suddenlly appear in front of us, I was so scared that I can feel my heart is going to come out from my mounth! Then the mummy said: "Ha! ha! Ha!! you all are being trap!". "What do you want?" cried Emma. "I want GOLD! GOLD!! Many many GOLDS!!!""Gold? but... we don't have any gold""No gold?""Ye..Ye.. yes!"said Danny. "Well, just stay here and be my lunch!""Run......!!!" cried Mr. Janus. So, we quickly run away. But the mummy is chasing us, I said to myself in my heart:"Oh...man! I was wrong about this! this was worst trip ever!"
Suddenly, i fell down. Then, the mummy step on me ,and said:"Yum!you are prefect for my Lunch, ha !ha!ha!"
try to make the story straight to the point. when the advanture start? can't wait....
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i can't want for chapter #3........so quick typing!!!!!
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